my badly written song 4 singing course

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by midnight sun (you can't catch me, i'm the palobread man) on Saturday, 14-Feb-2009 14:45:58

i will need to give this and probably sing it too on either this coming monday or the next one, so opinions and advice are appreciated...

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I see you lost in thought, wonder what's in your mind
What's troubling you, why are you crying?
Another so-called friend, he told you good words he never meant
Once again you dared to trust, and you did your best,
But all you did was forgotten
He left you alone in the dark.

Hey girl, you know, some times life is strange
The good things come to us just when we think it'll never change
So just wipe those tears away, no more crying.
You're gonna be ok, now give me a smile

And it makes me so sad, people acting so selfishly
Playing with someone who trusts them, hurting them so carelessly
And boy you've been playing your game, you've been causing her so much pain
All that you did was pretend, but it came to an end
And the end is her broken heart,
wondering if it'll ever heal.

But girl, you know, some times life is strange
The good things come to us just when we think it'll never change
So just wipe those tears away, no more crying.
You're gonna be ok, now give me a smile

Happiness will come to heal the pain
Just like the sun comes after the rain.
People will hurt you, bring you down
But here's a friend you need never doubt.
You can count on me
I will always be here

Hey girl, you know, some times life is strange
The good things come to us just when we think it'll never change
So just wipe those tears away, no more crying.
You're gonna be ok, now give me a smile

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Saturday, 14-Feb-2009 18:53:28

I love it! So much depth. I feel the encouragement, motivation, and care expressed. You should totally sing it.

Post 3 by Daenerys Targaryen (Enjoying Life) on Saturday, 14-Feb-2009 19:52:09

I love it too. I'm sure you'll do well singing it. Good luck!

Post 4 by Striker (Consider your self warned, i'm creative and offensive like handicap porn.) on Monday, 16-Feb-2009 12:32:27

lory, i really like this, the llyrics speek volumes for the emotion projected in it. and when you sing it i'm sure it will shine threw. good luck

Post 5 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Monday, 16-Feb-2009 13:13:26

aaaaw, Lory love, i really like that one! See? I knew you could do it! Huge hugs and good luck with it!